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In many cities, there is little control on the design and construction of new houses. Some people think that people can choose to build houses in their own style as the old house style in local areas. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

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cities
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design
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are
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 important for countries because that condition
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represents
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 the
country
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 culture. Many people claim that
human
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humans
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 must be to build
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home
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 in
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 personal
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 as the ancient home
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 in local areas.
This
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 situation has a number of benefits
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, there are
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 some drawbacks as well, as now will be discussed.
A
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 first possible advantage is
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 beyond
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humans
,
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 so
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each family must choose
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style
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 because that area is personal.
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 many countries have
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 culture and religion
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 situation impact
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cities
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beatues
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beauties
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 people want to
choosing
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old
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the old
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design
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most
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state protect old castle because
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it
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 attract many
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tourist
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tourists
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 every year and be
economy
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the economy
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 more
powerfull
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powerful
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, it seems to me that the disadvantage of
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barrier
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 towards new innovation and
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intend
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new
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 because that
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is make
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easy
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 nation life. Especially populations are
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 continuously
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 inhabitants need living
are
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for the reason the creating huge buildings in the
cities
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example
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 researchers show
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 to damage for
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generations
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 of humans. In the
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 if each person will create
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their own
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 personal
design
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construction
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the construction
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 of
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. In conclusion, each
style
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give
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 beauty on town but many
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people choose the newest
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 because
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 the best way for improving. I would hope
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old
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old-style
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style
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conservative
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is conservative
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 and
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 next generation.

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