The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
line graph depicts Underground Station
passenger numbers in London on one day at different times. The time range of the figure is from 6:00 am to 10:00 pm
.
Overall
, 8am and 6pm are passengers
peak hours, there are 400 passengers
in London underground station
at 8am, and ~380 passengers
at 6 pm
. In contrast
, the least frequented times at London underground station
are 6 am and 4 pm
, there are only 100 passengers
in the station
.
Looking at the trend of the figure. There is a period of rapid growth and then
a decline in the number of passengers
respectively in the morning and afternoon. The number of passengers
rapidly grew from 6 am to 8 pm
and then
reduce from 8 am to 10 am. While
in the afternoon, the number of passengers
grew from 4 pm
to 6 pm
and then
declined from 6pm to 8pm.Submitted by shjwudp on
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