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A balanced diet, or eating balanced meals, is the key to a healthy life. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

#diet #meals #life
As an increasing number of
people
concerned
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 about healthy
life
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living
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, it's interesting to analyse the role of a
belanced
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balanced
diet
. It's hard to deny that there are a lot of ways could improve
people
's health,and
such
 a fact leads some
people
 to generate the opinion that eating balanced
meals
 is not the key to a healthy
life
. In my personal view, I strongly hold that a balanced
diet
 is
a
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key to creating
human
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a human
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 healthy
life
. First and foremost, eating balanced
meals
 could help our
body
 obtain what they need
nutrition
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in nutrition
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 and vitamins. As we know, most
people
 prefer junk
food
 to healthy
food
 since junk
food
 tastes more delicious. But most
of
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junk
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the junk
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food
 is deep-fried
food
 with a lot of species for more flavour.
Junkjunk
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Junk junk
food
 makes
people
 feel satisfied but is not good for
human
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body
. We
also
 need vitamins from green vegetables and fruits. To be more specific, a balanced
diet
also
 could balance the
body
's health. Eating balanced
meals
 is slove the most of health issues. For example, if someone
who
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is getting sick
to
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at
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 the hospital. The doctor
also
 will give
patients's
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patients
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 some meal advice except treatment. Because
balanced
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a balanced
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diet
 could help our
body
 condition get recovery sooner.
Furthermore
, a voice arises that doing exercise
also
 is the key to a healthy
life
. In my opinion, fitness
also
 plays an important role in a healthy
life
. But if
people
 only focus on doing exercise
instead
 of a balanced
diet
,
it
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they
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 will waste the
people
's effort
what
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that
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 they trained in the gym before.
Due to balanced
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meals
 could help
people
 keep their muscles.
For example
, it's still not a healthy
life
 if
people
 keep training every day but they
also
 drink alcohol every day. In a nutshell, there are various methods to support
people
's healthy
life
. But a balanced
diet
 is normally considered
as
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the most important part of a healthy
life
. There is a famous quote "we are what we eat", I believed that if
people
 could understand what is necessary and needed for our physical and mental,
people
 will make the correct choice to choose healthy
life
.
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