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El siguiente gráfico muestra la población de India y China desde el año 2000 hasta la actualidad con proyecciones de crecimiento hasta el año 2050.

#el #siguiente #gráfico #muestra #población #india #china #desde #año #hasta #actualidad #proyecciones #crecimiento
Both countries as
China
 and
India
 here in
this
 graph
shows
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 us the changes in
population
 coming from 2000 to the possible projections for growth to 2050. At the beginning of 2000, the
population
 of
India
 was about 1.000
billion
of
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people
 which means,
India
 was having two hundred thousand less than
China
in
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 the same date compared, going beyond, moving into 2005
Indian’s
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population
 reached an increase of one hundred thousand
of
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people
 meanwhile
China
 had a
population
 of 1.200
billion
 of
people
.
In addition
, in concordance with
this
graph
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 we clearly see that
as
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China
as
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and
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India
 both are becoming bigger and bigger through
the
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time
due to
 their
constantly
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 increase
of
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population
. After 2010, the amount of
population
was
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peaking
up
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between these two countries, it seems like
for
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 2025
China
 will have a
population
 of 1.400
billion
,
whereas
India
 will probably have a
population
 of 1.300
billion
 it seems like in 2029 they will be quite similar,
nevertheless
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 it is not going to be possible until 2030 that both of them
leaped
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 in having equals averages in populations. Once these two countries had already gotten their picked equal average of 1.400
billion
 of populations it is predicted
China
’s
population
 will suddenly drop in concordance with
this
 graph
while
on the other
hand
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India
 will surge its
population
 having 100 thousand more than
China
, at the
beginning
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China
 was the one who was leading its
population
, but now it seems like
India
 is taking advantage; which means at the beginning of 2040
India
 will have 1.500
billion
 of
people
 and it will keep skyrocketing until to get its maximum which is predicted to be 1.700
billion
 of
people
, 300 more than
China
, as a conclusion it seems like in 2050
India
 will predominate in
population
 more than
china
,
China
 will maintain its average of 1.400.
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