The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.
The two maps depict the present Norbiton industrial area and the future development plan for that region.
Overall
, it can be seen that Norbiton industrial city will be changed to a residential field in the future.
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According to
the given maps, all factories will be converted to houses, and there will be a new roundabout Linking Words
at the end
of the south. Linking Words
In addition
, new two roads will be developed in the northwest space and the northern region from the central roundabout.
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Firstly
, a new large housing complex is planned to develop at the north edge of the lane across the river. Linking Words
Secondly
, on the right side of the map, a new medical centre is projected to build between two paths in the southeast area. Linking Words
In addition
, a new school will be constructed at the edge of the path, and there will be a new playground on the north side of the road. Linking Words
Finally
, on the left side of the map, there are new three houses, one of which will be built Linking Words
at the end
of the road, and the other one will be along the pathway. And Linking Words
also
, they have planned to develop new shops in the southwest field of the mapLinking Words
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