The charts show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
A glance at the charts provided reveals the
consumption
of water
for different purposes in 6 major part
of the world.One noticeable point Fix the agreement mistake
parts
that
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apply
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apply
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apply
water
consumption
in agricultural area
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areas
constitues
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constitutes
water
consumtion
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consumption
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apply
the
countries.
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apply
According to
the graph,the percentage of consumption
of water
in industrial
sector Correct article usage
the industrial
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of North
america
and Europe has striking similarities in their trends with 48% and 53% respectively.Change the capitalization
America
Water
consumption
in other countries is between 7% and 12%.
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consumption
in agricultural
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the agricultural
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in other
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the biggest
with
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of
the
minimum of 32% in Europe.
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a
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,domestic use
in these contries
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countries
are
less than industrial Change the verb form
is
use
or agricultural use
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,Europe Change the capitalization
America
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and
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and
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and
america
are the biggest consumer of Change the capitalization
America
water
in domestic use
with 19%,15% and 13% alternatively.Submitted by marzieh.kiani on
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