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The birth rate in most developed countries is predicted to begin to fall over the next 50 years. By 2030 it is estimated that over one third of the population in most developed countries will be aged 65 and over. What effects will these predictions have on developed countries if they prove true?What can be done now to deal with this situation? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays, low childbirth in major countries
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one of the serious topics discussed worldwide. If the
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 rate keeps decreasing,
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 the average age of the majority will be old, and it will attack labour, finances, politics, and so on. In
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 essay, I will discuss how a low
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 rate will influence the
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 and suggest how to prevent
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 situation. First of all, if the number of childbirth gets lower and lower in future, the
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 will lose youth power
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. If the retired generation takes one-third of the populace in 2030, it directly means that young labour powers and their
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 need to
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 them more than now, and
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 may cause less national
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 will provide for youths.
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, it is hard to guess that the rest of the population in 2030 will be the labour-power because it includes infants and teenagers who
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 need backing.
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, if society started to focus on elderly
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's public help rather than younger generations,
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people
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 need to demand only their work with less free time and private
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; and more
people
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 can feel the importance of private
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 rather than being encouraged to give
birth
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. To increase the
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 rate, national
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 is most important. Numerous younger generations started to give up to have a child, and a major reason for
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 is that they have a less private
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 and financial problem. If the
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 wants to encourage
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 to get an infant,
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 the government should guarantee time to take care of the child and enough daily
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support
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,
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 as giving money or sending necessary childcare goods. In conclusion, encouraging
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 to have a child is not a simple problem, and it needs plenty of help from the government as a campaign. If elderly
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 take the majority of the population and labour power decreases,
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 childbirth will decline together.
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, if there is backing from the nation,
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people
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 will start to have children rather than the period without it.

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