Some people consider price as the most important thing to think about when buying product (such as cell phone) or services (e.g. medical treatment). Do you agree or disagree?

It has been argued by many individuals that

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worth is an essential thing to claim related

purchasing

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smartphones or medical treatment. I totally agree with

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given statement and

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essay shall shed light upon my perspective

along with

a reasoned conclusion. Foremost, the fundamental cause behind my agreement is that when commoners think about price

while

buying items, they may save

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capital and financial security in the later stage of

life

, so people should spend

less

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amounts of

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money

on items but medical expenses

is

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necessary for each and everyone's

life

.

For instance

, a survey conducted by Harward University revealed that 65% of the public have expend rarely on electronic gadgets with the assistance of

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they have protected their

further

life

.

Hence

, it puts

positive

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impact on the population.

Besides

this

, human beings would become extravagant. Once humans go outside and purchase unnecessary things without

think

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about

its

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rate and quality, they could become

spendthrift

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as well as

waste their cash

on

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recklessly,

whereas

if they think about the price

of

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before buying anything with the aid of

this

they may learn

value

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the value

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of the

money

.

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, it is published an article by The Tribune newspaper showed that approximately 55% of humans have knowledge

how

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to use

of

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money

in their

life

as they spend funds after

more

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thinking about it.

To conclude

, it is not only

secure

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the

money

for their future time but

also

the citizens might acquire investment of the

money

on mandatory products.