Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter •    say why a driving licence is advantageous •    recommend a driving school •    give any extra guidance/tips

Dear Mia, I am writing to you in response to your plan of learning how to
drive
well.
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all
, I really appreciate that I am the first person you come and ask for some advice. I say you should definitely go for the idea that you have currently about taking up a driving course. I assure you that having a driving license can be a plus since you can always
drive
around whenever you feel like it without putting yourself
into
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trouble or relying on anyone's help.
Additionally
, you can even make a career out of it if you can
drive
skilfully. What's more,
this
license can be used as
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personal identification even when you forget your national ID at home. How convenient it is!
Therefore
, there is one well-known driving
school
that pops up in my mind
while
writing
this
letter to you; it's "Success Driving
School
" where I
also
learnt how to
drive
like a professional. Not only are the driving tutors there amazing but
also
that
school
is known to be the best in the city compared to other institutes. You'll be surprised how terrific the service is there, always assisting you till you get a license as the final step. Just be extra careful with the application deadline in order to secure your spot in that
school
as many people around that area tend to join the course there.
Last
but not least, do not test
drive
any cars when you are intoxicated no matter how good you've become as a driver after the course. Promise me that, won't you? Anyway, Good luck with your new endeavour. Please keep me posted too. Love you, Bran
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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