The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given pie charts depict information about the
population
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of two countries in different
age
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groups over the period of 50 years. The data has been calibrated in percentage.
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, it is crystal clear that an overwhelming proportion of the
population
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was from
Yemen
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in both years during
age
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0-14
whereas
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the least
population
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was from Italy in
age
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0-14. At a fleeting glance, it is evident that in the year 2000, the
population
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of
Yemen
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was 48.3%and 50.1% between ages 0-14 and 15-59.
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, 3.6%
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of Yemen
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Yemen
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population
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was from over60 in 2000
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while
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this
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figure will increase steadily by 2.1%.
Besides
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this
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, the
population
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of
Yemen
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will be 57.3% and 37.0%. Moving towards the remaining information, it can be clearly seen that by 2000, the highest ratio of pollution was in Italy more than half in the
age
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group 15-59 but it will be 46.2% by the year 2050. Apart from it, 11.5% and 46.2% of the
population
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will be in Itlay from the
age
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group above 60 to 0-14.
Additionally
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, in 2000, there was a difference of 10.2% in the
population
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of Itlay between ages 0-14 and more than 60.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, age, yemen with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • population distribution
  • age group
  • population pyramid
  • projections
  • young population
  • aging population
  • demographic shift
  • increase in elderly population
  • proportion
  • percentage
  • population dynamics
  • top-heavy
  • balanced age distribution
  • healthcare needs
  • pension provision
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