Speaking more than one language is important these days. Hence, children should start learning a second language during school time. Do you agree or disagree?

In
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is the simplest way to communicate with each other. There is a discussion about that it
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crucial to learn
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kind of languages and it should
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from school. I totally agree with
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notion and I will discuss
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in forthcoming paragraphs. To commence with benefits of multilingual person. The first and foremost is that
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of individuals like to study
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foreign nations. So if they already have knowledge about the
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of other
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. It would be easy for them to survive there. They can take admissions and easily find jobs for their livelihood.
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, people like to travel a lot. They visit other countries as well.
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distinct languages,
firstly
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and
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, India is a diverse country. majority of
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from all around the world visit here to see
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and numerous
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would use own
language
of tourists to make them comfortable.
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,
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of individuals believe that
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generation would forget their own
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and culture with
language
. They will
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they lost their culture.
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, if
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old generation understands the importance of learning another
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, they will
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tradition will never remove from
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language
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every place, like
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studies, work interviews and in technology
also
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To conclude
, it is fruitful to become bilingual and multi-lingual. As it helps people in different sectors and rise their knowledge.
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