the maps below show an industrial area in the town norbition and planed future development of the site.

the maps below show an industrial area in the town norbition and planed future development of the site.
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The maps give information about the industrial area in the city of Norbiton , processing the
future
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development of
this
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site. It is important to note that in the
future
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factories will be replaced by housing. From the left where the town is located,we can see that these days there is nothing after that but in the north part of the map, there is a river that constantly goes from west to the east
also
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, in the middle of the layout there is a
square
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that is
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surrender by factories and a
road
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to the right part of the map
that is
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connected to it.
Moreover
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, there is a long
road
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in the south part that starts before town and goes to the east.
On the other hand
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, in the
future
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we will see the river is cut by a bridge and above them, there will be a big housing and on its right hand there will be farmland
furthermore
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, the
square
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will be surrounded by the medical centre and shops
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there going to be a playground in that
road
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which is connected to the
square
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and
at the end
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of it will be a school
also
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in
future
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in the south
road
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will have an another small
square
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, that is".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words future, square, road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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