the maps below show an industrial area in the town norbition and planed future development of the site.

the maps below show an industrial area in the town norbition and planed future development of the site.
The maps give information about the industrial area in the city of Norbiton , processing the
future
development of
this
site. It is important to note that in the
future
factories will be replaced by housing. From the left where the town is located,we can see that these days there is nothing after that but in the north part of the map, there is a river that constantly goes from west to the east
also
, in the middle of the layout there is a
square
that is
surrender by factories and a
road
to the right part of the map
that is
connected to it.
Moreover
, there is a long
road
in the south part that starts before town and goes to the east.
On the other hand
, in the
future
we will see the river is cut by a bridge and above them, there will be a big housing and on its right hand there will be farmland
furthermore
, the
square
will be surrounded by the medical centre and shops
while
there going to be a playground in that
road
which is connected to the
square
and
at the end
of it will be a school
also
in
future
in the south
road
will have an another small
square
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