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LOGGING OF THE RAINFOREST IS A SERIOUS PROBLEM AND MAY LEAD TO THE EXTINCTION OF ANIMAL LIFE AND HUMAN LIFE. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE.

#rainforest #extinction #life
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the
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raw materials is a serious issue
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natural
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the natural
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 habitat of animals and
human
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the human
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 population.
Therefore
,
deforestation
 which is
resulted
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 of logging
of
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 the rainforest
,
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 is one of the most important
consequence
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 of
this
 action. In my
opinion
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this
 argument is altogether correct.
Firstly
, logging of the rainforest destroys many
species
' natural habitat and restricts their precious
lifes
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lives
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.
For example
, some of the rare bird
species
 can only live in a tropical climate which is provided by rainforests. Other temperatures above or below
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normal lead to damage
their
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 circulatory systems.
Secondly
, some climate activists point
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 most of the oxygen
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the athmosphere
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athmosphere
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atmosphere
, which is necessary for life, is provided by rainforests. It is true that
,
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 people prepare
their
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dooms-day
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 with
their
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irresponsible actions
such
 as
deforestation
 and depletion of raw materials.
On the other hand
, decreased level of oxygen may lead to irreversible respiratory diseases
such
 as lung cancer and COPD.
Finally
, uncontrolled human actions can have
negative
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 impact on both animals and humans.
For instance
, logging of the rainforest and depletion of resources would be proper examples for
this
 argument. In my point of view,
deforestation
 may lead to
extinction
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the extinction
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 of some animal
species
 and human life.
In addition
, people should aware of the health problems related to logging in
a
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 long term. In conclusion,
deforestation
due to
 logging is a serious problem because of the consequences on human and animal life. I
am totally agree
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 with that brief result which is highly important for all
species
.
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