The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008
The presented bar charts depict the subsequent pathways taken by UK graduate and postgraduate
students
in the year 2008, excluding those who embarked on full-time Use synonyms
work
.
It can be observed that Use synonyms
further
study was the most prevalent choice of destination for both graduate and postgraduate Linking Words
students
, Use synonyms
while
voluntary Linking Words
work
was the least favoured.
The number of graduates who pursued Use synonyms
further
study soared to almost 30,000, which was significantly higher than those who engaged in other pursuits. Linking Words
Conversely
, a meagre 3500 graduates chose voluntary Linking Words
work
, rendering it the most uncommon post-university destination. Part-time Use synonyms
work
and unemployment held a similar number of graduates, with 17,735 and 16,235 respectively.
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Likewise
, for postgraduates, the largest and smallest groups, respectively, were those who went on to Linking Words
further
study, with 2,725 Linking Words
students
, and those who opted for voluntary Use synonyms
work
, with only 345 Use synonyms
students
. Use synonyms
However
, a considerable number of postgraduates engaged in part-time Linking Words
work
, with 2,535 Use synonyms
students
, as opposed to unemployment, with only 1,625 Use synonyms
students
.Use synonyms
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