The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008
The presented bar charts depict the subsequent pathways taken by UK graduate and postgraduate
students
in the year 2008, excluding those who embarked on full-time work
.
It can be observed that further
study was the most prevalent choice of destination for both graduate and postgraduate students
, while
voluntary work
was the least favoured.
The number of graduates who pursued further
study soared to almost 30,000, which was significantly higher than those who engaged in other pursuits. Conversely
, a meagre 3500 graduates chose voluntary work
, rendering it the most uncommon post-university destination. Part-time work
and unemployment held a similar number of graduates, with 17,735 and 16,235 respectively.
Likewise
, for postgraduates, the largest and smallest groups, respectively, were those who went on to further
study, with 2,725 students
, and those who opted for voluntary work
, with only 345 students
. However
, a considerable number of postgraduates engaged in part-time work
, with 2,535 students
, as opposed to unemployment, with only 1,625 students
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