The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having on language in the world?

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Generally,
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known as International
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used by people around the
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. That makes
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becoming the most prominent
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in the
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right now. And because of that, there are
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advantage and disadvantages. I will explain more about
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with, people think when
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becoming the only
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language
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spoken globally that make advantages in terms of communication around the
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easy to understand because everyone is using
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to speak.
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, the development of tourism doesn’t have to worry when they travel around the
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. And if that happens, it will be
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for
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and it can make
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come
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the destinations
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the
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have.
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, the disadvantages
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becoming the only
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that we used is there are no more
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that the
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have. No more unique
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, because sometimes the
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about the
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in the
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because every country has their national
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or maybe
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itself. And the other
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if we are all using
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is maybe have
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the
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negative
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the development of tourism, so they can’t learn about the national
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or the traditional
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because we
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for communication. Now for the conclusions.
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is good for being the international
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,
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because we need at least one
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for communication in the
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. And
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really good for the development of tourism so we can understand each other when we travel around the
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.
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can’t be the only
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spoken globally because every country has their national
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and traditional
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and that
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the unique
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to learn for the tourist.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Prominent
  • Contribute
  • Global
  • Advantages
  • Disadvantages
  • Communication
  • Understanding
  • Ease
  • Business
  • Trade
  • Cultural exchange
  • Unity
  • Access
  • Information
  • Simplify
  • Travel
  • Tourism
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