Lack of fresh water is becoming a global issue of increasing importance. What problems does this shortage cause? What measures could be taken to overcome these problems?

Water
is a compound that consists of 1 oxygen and a hydrogen ion and it covers 40 % of our total body surface. It is now arising that having
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insufficient
clean
water
is happening to be a worldwide matter. In
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I will discuss why
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problem is
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occurring
and I will
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tackle what are the possible solutions for
this
.
Water
plays a vital role in our everyday lives
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for drinking, cooking and cleaning. Nowadays, lack of discipline is
one
of the main
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of most of our problems.
For example
, proper garbage disposal has been a lifelong matter in most places. Apparently, rivers have been
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of the
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spot
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of many people and Pasig river in the
Philippines
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is
one
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however
, without eyes that are watching, they will not abide and still throw trashes
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that river. Setting rules and regulations will create a balance, once it is implemented and if some improvement can be seen. Proper waste disposal is
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how we can maintain cleanliness.
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, leaders need to be involved
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this
matter. First having a consistent truck collector will
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help. Installing surveillance cameras
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water
areas will
also
help find the culprit.
In addition
, punishment like
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for each kilo of garbage will be the best way to threaten people not to throw anything on any
water
surfaces. Respect is necessary to make something work as it will create a harmonious relationship.
At the end
of the day, we are all accountable for every action that we create especially if
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our mother nature that can fight back terribly
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way so we need to be very careful.
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