■ Write a letter to a sports club. Tell them you are not satisfied with the service and have already let them know about this. Write ▪What exactly wrong with their service ▪What happened after you complained the first time ▪What you want the club to do after your letter

Dear Sir, I'm truly unfortunate to bring
incident to you. I have gone through an awful experience at your sports club the
weekend. I made a booking on your ground for a cricket match, which was to participate with my colleague. They all had a huge blame on me
due to
your dreadful service. The cricket match was scheduled to start at 09:00 AM. And, the booking I made was from 08:30 AM to 12:00 PM.
, the groundsman didn't allow my participants to enter the ground before that booking time. Some of them came through a long ride for more than 3 hours and
is the second time the same scenario happened for me. The incident was complained by me in
time as well.
, your staff didn't bother that at all. They told me to amend my booking for
half an hour to make it settled. That was a nasty request for any new visitor. My staright thought on
problem is to implement a convenient method of booking and entering people.
, your staff need to be more professional when dealing with people indeed. I hope you will consider
matter and fix these gray areas promptly. Yours faithfully, Vishva
Submitted by vishvaisuranga on

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