■ Write a letter to a sports club. Tell them you are not satisfied with the service and have already let them know about this. Write ▪What exactly wrong with their service ▪What happened after you complained the first time ▪What you want the club to do after your letter
Dear Sir,
I'm truly unfortunate to bring
this
incident to you. I have gone through an awful experience at your sports club the last
weekend. I made a booking on your ground for a cricket match, which was to participate with my colleague. They all had a huge blame on me due to
your dreadful service.
The cricket match was scheduled to start at 09:00 AM. And, the booking I made was from 08:30 AM to 12:00 PM. Consequently
, the groundsman didn't allow my participants to enter the ground before that booking time. Some of them came through a long ride for more than 3 hours and this
is the second time the same scenario happened for me.
The incident was complained by me in last
time as well. Besides
, your staff didn't bother that at all. They told me to amend my booking for further
half an hour to make it settled. That was a nasty request for any new visitor.
My staright thought on this
problem is to implement a convenient method of booking and entering people. Furthermore
, your staff need to be more professional when dealing with people indeed.
I hope you will consider this
matter and fix these gray areas promptly.
Yours faithfully,
VishvaSubmitted by vishvaisuranga on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite