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In many countries, a lot of food is wasted. Why do people waste food? How can we reduce the amount of food waste? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant example from your knowledge or experience.

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Food
 wastage is very common these days, especially in some rich countries.
On the other hand
, poor countries
facing
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face
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 huge hunger crises.
This
esssay
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essay
 will focus on its
and
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apply
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reason and its resolution. Developed countries
focussed
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focus
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 more on quality
food
 rather than quantity and
thus
 we see lots of
food
gets
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get
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 wasted in big restaurants . Lots of
food
 gets rejected by the chef and in testing in
order
 to serve the best quality to their customer. Famous restaurants
prepares
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prepare
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food
 in bulk to maintain their reputation like fast service and availability and
this
 eventually wasted lots of
food
 when
its
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it's
it is
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 not consumed
in
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for
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certain
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a certain
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 duration.
In addition
 to it, Individuals
also
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 responsible for
this
 situation. Taking
example
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the example
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 of my office party
organzing
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organising
 committee, they always
order
 30
percent
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per cent
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 more
food
 in
order
 to maintain its reputation and most of the time the
food
 gets wasted. In
order
 to avoid
this
, Government should make strict policies and monitor
situation
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the situation
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on
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in
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 restaurants and
cafe's
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cafes
cafe
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.
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