ou and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter • introduce yourself • explain what is wrong with the furniture • say what action you would like the landlord to take

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Dear Mr Joe, I, Kumarjeet Poddar, am your tenant who recently moved to one of the flats which are located in Toronto, Canada and I am pleased to tell you that it is an amazing room. I am hoping that you and your family are

also

doing great. I am sorry for the inconvenience but I would like to inform you that I am not happy with your furniture services.

Firstly

, as I moved with my immediate family, I need the complete set of furniture

such

as a cupboard, dining table and chairs.

Although

it is available in the house but not in good condition. It has lots of defects and a few things are

also

not present in

this

house.

Secondly

, I am new to

this

country and truly, I do not aware of many things. So, it would be appreciated if you help me personally.

Furthermore

, I need study tables for my kids

as well as

all the furniture types of equipment which I can use for work from home. It is my humble request that please look into

this

issue very carefully and fulfil my all general needs. I am waiting for your actions. Best Regards, Kumarjeet Poddar

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

201 words

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