Write a letter to a friend expressing your interest to seek employment in a different country. Your letter should include: – Why you want to work in a different country – What type of work you will be looking for – Questions you have about working in a different country that your friend may be able to answer

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Dear Sir, I am Aditya and I am writing to you to express my interest in a recently posted job at your company. I am applying for the position of 'Financial Analyst' as I have the relevant work experience required for the position. My primary reason for applying for
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job is my deep interest in the field of finance.
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, I have been waiting to work in your establishment for many years.
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will help me to grow in the corporate hierarchy,
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it can be beneficial for the company. As a Financial analyst, I can perform deep market research to provide the approximate market size.
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, I can provide the monthly trend report of our competitor's performance.
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, I can use my editing skills to provide high-definition photographs of our products. As I am currently enrolled in a course, I can work part-time from Monday to Friday, 9 am to 1 pm. I believe my time invested in your company will be worth the value which I will provide. I look forward to receiving a message from your side. Yours Sincerely, Aditya Bawa
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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