Your colleague recently gave you a book. You had a presentation, and this book helped you in the presentation. Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter, • tell the topic of your presentation • why the presentation was important for you • how the book helped you in presentation

Dear Tom, I hope

this

letter finds you well. I am writing to express my gratitude for your renting me the ABC book for my presentation. Thanks to your study aid, I could do very well in my lecture at the BBC conference yesterday. The topic of my presentation was about SEO of the company's website. I had to explain how to make websites at the top of the google search engine. At

this

conference, I had some executives from my company. They are looking for an employee who can be a manager of a new project.

That is

why

this

lecture was very important to me. The ABC that I borrowed from you has a lot of topics about SEO.

In addition

this

, it has so many examples in each topic.

Therefore

, I could easily understand difficult ideas. With your study aid, I could find a lot of useful ideas and extend my knowledge widely. I very much appreciate your kindness. I'm looking forward to seeing you soon. Kind regards, Ayaka Hioki

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0Word repetition
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8 paragraphs

174 words

8.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Your colleague recently gave you a book. You had a presentation, and this book helped you in the presentation. Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter, • tell the topic of your presentation • why the presentation was important for you • how the book helped you in presentation

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Museums and art gallaries should concentrate on works that show histroy and culture of their own country rather than works of the other parts in the world. To what extent to do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that the best way to be successful in life is to get a university education. Others disagree and say that nowadays, this is no longer true. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

People have differrent job expectations for jobs. Some people prefer to do the same job for the same company, whereas others prefer to change jobs frequently. Write ab the advantages and disadvantages of each viewpoint.

Some people think that a person improves their intellectual skills more when doing group activities. To what extent do you agree? Use specific details and examples to explain your view.