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Your colleague recently gave you a book. You had a presentation, and this book helped you in the presentation. Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter, • tell the topic of your presentation • why the presentation was important for you • how the book helped you in presentation

#colleague #book #presentation #topic
Dear Tom, I hope
this
 letter finds you well. I am writing to express my gratitude for your renting me the ABC book for my presentation. Thanks to your study aid, I could do very well in my lecture at the BBC conference yesterday. The topic of my presentation was about SEO of the company's website. I had to explain how to make websites at the top of the google search engine. At
this
 conference, I had some executives from my company. They are looking for an employee who can be a manager of a new project.
That is
 why
this
 lecture was very important to me. The ABC that I borrowed from you has a lot of topics about SEO.
In addition
 to
this
, it has so many examples in each topic.
Therefore
, I could easily understand difficult ideas. With your study aid, I could find a lot of useful ideas and extend my knowledge widely. I very much appreciate your kindness. I'm looking forward to seeing you soon. Kind regards, Ayaka Hioki
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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