The chart below shows the percentage of adults of different age groups in the UK who use internet every day from 2003-2006.

The chart below shows the percentage of adults of different age groups in the UK who use internet every day from 2003-2006.
The chart represents the proportion of adults with various
age
teams in
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Great Britain who
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Internet
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daily between 2003 to 2006.
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, the highest
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of
internet
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were
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among
young
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age
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compared with the other
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were elderly
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. First of all, in the chart the
age
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of 16 to 24 young adults had used
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the most by the
year
of
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2005 with
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100 % before that, it has been used
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ratio 80% in 2003 and 2004 respectively. But it dropped by 10% by the
year
of 2006. In the meanwhile, the
group
of 25 to 44 adults had a gradual
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from 50% to 80% approximately by the
year
of 2003 to 2006 respectively and
also
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group
with
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the
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of 45 to 54 there
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similar upward trend with almost
same
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percentages which means
the
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both groups had constant percentages without any changes.
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, in the
year
2006
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the highest
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used
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internet
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by the
age
group
of 55 to 64. Before that
year
they had little fluctuation and they remain under 36% around. At the
last
group
of people with
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age
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65+, they used
internet
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lot
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less than any other
group
as
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to 3 years they
had
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used
internet
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20%
all
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together which is
lowest
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use of
internet
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age, internet, group, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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