Some people believe that history has no value in the contemporary world. But some believe that we still need history to learn from the past. Discuss both viewpoints and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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It has truly been said that those who forget
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are condemned to repeat it.
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there are
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who tend to underestimate or even negate the role of
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in the modern day and age, there are many others like me who hold the contrary view and would much recommend a pride of place to the study of
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. Speaking for those who do not see much value in the study of
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today, it can be said that
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is about the past which is dead and buried. They are thinking
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we need to look back at forgettable events of the past and curse our forefathers for the follies they committed.
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of
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, they often recommend
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forward to the renaissance of knowledge and science for the
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of humanity.
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,
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people
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argue that
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is often biased, giving the version of the victor rather than of the vanquished. At the other end are the
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who believe that
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is the gateway
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our learning from the past. Unless we study the
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and why’s of what all
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like Hitler did, how will we
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to guard against
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evil in future?
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, viewing
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from the narrow confines of wars and victories will result in missing out on a lot of fine print.
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is
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of past wisdom and a story of human evolution. In conclusion, as I already stated, I would lend my weight in favour of those who hold
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as much in esteem as any other field of knowledge.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Contemporary world
  • Irrelevant
  • Fast-paced
  • Distorted
  • Manipulated
  • Reliable
  • Current
  • Relevant
  • Evolve
  • Mistakes
  • Inspiration
  • Role models
  • Identity
  • Cultural heritage
  • Well-rounded
  • Civilization
  • Analytical skills
  • Empathy
  • Tolerance
  • Achievements
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