The chart below shows the total number of minutes(in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided intot three categories , from 1995-2002 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below shows the total number of minutes(in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided intot three categories , from 1995-2002

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
This
chart depicts the total
number
of
minutes
(in
billions
) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories , between 1995 to 2002. It is clear from the graph that
this
is the total
number
of
minutes
for Local ,National and international with Mobiles.
According to
what is shown,we can see the total
number
of
minutes
for Local from 1995 to 1999 had risen up from 70
minutes
(in
billions
) to 90, but after 1999 the total
number
of
minutes
drop to 75
minutes
(in
billions
).
While
the total
number
of
minutes
for National and international in 1995 to 2002 go up from 35
minutes
(in
billions
) to 60.In the end, the total
number
of
minutes
for Mobiles (all calls) from 1995 to 2002 increased from 0
minutes
(in
billions
) to 41.
To sum up
,we could say that the UK community using the telephone for calls
change
Change preposition
over change
show examples
period of 8 years and the biggest
number
of people using the telephone for calls is Local.
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