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The chart below shows the total number of minutes(in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided intot three categories , from 1995-2002 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below shows the total number of minutes(in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided intot three categories , from 1995-2002 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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This
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 chart depicts the total
number
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 of
minutes
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(in
billions
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) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories , between 1995 to 2002. It is clear from the graph that
this
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 is the total
number
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 of
minutes
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 for Local ,National and international with Mobiles.
According to
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 what is shown,we can see the total
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 of
minutes
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 for Local from 1995 to 1999 had risen up from 70
minutes
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(in
billions
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) to 90, but after 1999 the total
number
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 of
minutes
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 drop to 75
minutes
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(in
billions
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).
While
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 the total
number
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 of
minutes
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 for National and international in 1995 to 2002 go up from 35
minutes
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(in
billions
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) to 60.In the end, the total
number
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 of
minutes
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 for Mobiles (all calls) from 1995 to 2002 increased from 0
minutes
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(in
billions
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) to 41.
To sum up
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,we could say that the UK community using the telephone for calls
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over change
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 period of 8 years and the biggest
number
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 of people using the telephone for calls is Local.

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