The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person

in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and

make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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This
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graph provides data on average emissions of carbon dioxide (CO2) per person in five countries, the United Kingdom (UK), Sweden, Italy, and
lastly
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, Portugal. The Y-axis shows CO2 emissions in metric tonnes,
whereas
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, the X-axis shows 5 different years, from 1967 until 2007.
To begin
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with, an
overall
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analysis of the data illustrates important points, which are, the highest country with CO2 emissions each year is The UK, as it started in 1967 between 10 and 12, and ended in 2007 with a number just above 8. Portugal, begin as the lowest country and managed to end up
also
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with the lowest number
along with
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Sweden. Italy in 1967 was somewhere above 4 and in 2007 was just below 8. 
However
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, an
overall
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evaluation of
this
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data highlights the increased usage of resources that produce a huge amount of CO2 in the UK.
In contrast
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, Portugal managed to limit its dependence on resources that polluted the climate.
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