The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbinton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given maps give information about the future changes within the
factory
area of Norbinton.
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Overall
, we can see that, compared to the past, most of the Linking Words
factory
's buildings have been replaced by house properties. Use synonyms
In addition
, new buildings were erected for the majority in the southern Linking Words
part
of the town.
First of all, in the western Use synonyms
part
, a new Use synonyms
road
was added to the roundabout with two house blocks erected by it. Just behind Use synonyms
this
branch, a Linking Words
factory
piece was converted into shops. Going to the north, another Use synonyms
road
was built, which goes across the river by turning down Use synonyms
part
of the farmland. Use synonyms
Then
, more housing blocks were developed within the new highway.
Looking to the north-east Linking Words
part
of the town, the farmland has remained the same, Use synonyms
however
, to the south, many changes have been made. A playground and two house blocks were added above the already present main Linking Words
road
, Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
at the end
of it, the Linking Words
factory
building was repurposed into a school. Use synonyms
Finally
, to the south Linking Words
part
of the same Use synonyms
road
, we can see a new housing area and to the left, a medical centre was erected.Use synonyms
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