there have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do

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Dear Mr Joe, I, Kumarjeet Poddar, am currently associated with Capgemini India and I reside in Mumbai, precisely Santacruz. So, I prefer the bus to commute to my office location. Nowadays, I am facing some issues.

Hence

, I would like to tell you that the frequency of buses is not optimistic.

Firstly

, travelling from Santacruz to Airoli is a quite tedious task for me but you have provided excellent facilities and it is convenient for people like me.

Furthermore

, for a few days, buses are not regular and it directly impacts the working hours at my office.

Additionally

, It has been seen that for two weeks the reliability of buses has decreased.

Due to

this

, I am unable to reach the office on the time.

Therefore

, I need to take a long route and it is too much stress. I would like to inform you that please check it personally because I have raised concerns multiple times but your company does not take any action.

Moreover

, please take the necessary actions and please try to find reasons for

this

issue. I hope that you will take some action as soon as possible. yours faithfully, Kumarjeet Poddar

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

195 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

adhering to schedules
inconvenience
daily routine
punctuality
frequency during peak hours
overcrowding
commuters
update system
reliable
maintenance
breakdowns
irregular bus timings
passengers
delays
unreliable
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