The line graph below gives information on cinema attendance in the UK.

The line graph below gives information on cinema attendance in the UK.
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theatre participation in the UK.
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, it can be
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seen that all the age groups had the same line direction throughout the period. To start with, in 1990,
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individuals
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of 44 had the peak statistics which is a little bit below 40%, after 5 years it slightly increased to exactly 45%. Over
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time it dramatically rose to approximately 52%.
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, adults aged 34-44 years had relatively
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