The line graph below gives information on cinema attendance in the UK.
The following line graph illustrates the data
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theatre participation in the UK. Change preposition
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individuals
age
of 44 had the peak statistics which is a little bit below 40%, after 5 years it slightly increased to exactly 45%. Over Add an article
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