The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and 2018.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The bar chart compares the allocation of weekly household budgets in a country in two different years, 1968 and 2018.
Overall
Linking Words
, in the former year, families spent the largest portion of their income on food,
while
Linking Words
in 2018,
this
Linking Words
priority shifted to entertainment, accounting for more than one-fifth of total expenditure. The year 2018 witnessed a rise in the distribution of expenditure on several terms, including that on recreation doubling from less than one-tenth to over 20%.
This
Linking Words
growth was followed by the cost of housing( up 19% from 1968) and transportation( around 6%).
On the other hand
Linking Words
, over fifty years, the spending on food halved, from 35% to roughly 17%. A similar trend was
also
Linking Words
seen in the expenses on garments
as well as
Linking Words
personal goods where their proportions dipped by the same five per cent. The budget for fuel and power remains the least in the two years, with a slight decrease from about 6% to 4%,
whereas
Linking Words
there was no change in the spending on household goods.
Submitted by SHUYAN WANG on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • compare
  • spending patterns
  • allocated
  • weekly income
  • significant changes
  • essential items
  • food
  • housing
  • clothing
  • leisure
  • communication
  • increase
  • decrease
  • twofold rise
  • substantial increase
  • quadrupling
  • declined
  • food and drink
  • slight increase
  • prioritizing
  • necessities
  • transitioned
  • portio
  • non-essential items
What to do next:
Look at other essays: