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Some People Think That The Teenagers Should Be Required To Do Unpaid Work In Their Free Time To Help The Local Community. They Believe This Would Benefit Both The Teenagers And Society As A Whole.

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Youngsters are the building blocks of the nation and they play an important role in serving
society
 because at
this
 age they are full of energy not only mentally but physically
also
. some people think that youth should do some voluntary work for the
society
 in their free time and it would be beneficial for both of them. I agree with the statement. it has numerous benefits which will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin
 with, they could do a lot of activities and make their spare time fruitful. first of all, they can teach children living in slum areas because they are unable to afford education in schools or colleges.
as a result
, they will become civilized individuals and
do
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not indulge in antisocial activities. by doing
this
 they could gain a lot of experience and becomes responsible towards
the
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society
. it would be beneficial in their future perspective.
In addition
 to
this
, they learn a sense of cooperation and sharing with other
persons
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the
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society
.
for instance
, they could grow plants and trees
at
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 public places and
this
 would be helpful not only to make the
surrounding
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 clean and green but reduce
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pollution
also
 to great extent.
moreover
, they could arrange awareness programmes in
society
 and set an example among the natives of the state.
this
 will make the social bonding strong between the individuals and
this
 will
also
 enhance their social skills. In conclusion, they can “kill two birds with one stone” because it has a great advantage both for
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society
 and for
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adolescents. both the parents,
as well as
 teachers, should encourage the teens to take part in the activities of serving the community in their free time.
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