Nowadays it's very common now to see youngsters making the decision of taking away their own lives and not even thinking about the consequences their families are going to face for the remaining of days. In this essay, I am going to discuss the factors causing this and also suggest some solutions.

Firstly

, the large number of

students

who are forced to take

this

decision of committing suicide will be mostly based on the fear of exams, especially medical

students

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That is

to say, In 2021, a girl from

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Tamil Nadu

committed suicide as she

didnt

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didn't

acheive

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achieve

the required mark for her to get the medical seat.

This

happens because of the immense pressure put on

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the education system, community and

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families themselves.

As a result

, they have to face

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peer pressure, particularly at a young age will be a difficult task.

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it was never the right decision to take anyway. To resolve

this

issue, it should be the responsibility of

parents

to let them know that

this

is not the end of the world and they should give them the freedom to choose their own career path

instead

of forcing them to be a doctor

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engineer

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Secondly

, apart from the

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there are quite a few youngsters who will be depressed in life and not

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up to others,

consequently

ending their lives.

For example

, a girl from my neighbourhood has been facing harassment

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from her classmate persistently for around two years. She couldn't open up to her

parents

as they might stop her education and arrange a marriage against her will.

As a result

, without letting anyone know she decided to put a

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her life.

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Therefore

, the solution is that

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severe punishment should be enforced

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these people

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so that in future we can prevent these mistakes and create awareness

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children

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the

consquence

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consequence

consequences

of these suicides.

Furthermore

, the

parents

should be friendly to their

childrens

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children

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to openly talk about anything and support them in every situation. By doing

this

we can completely stop

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suicidal thoughts among youngsters. In conclusion, even though

childrens

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are facing

this

exam pressure and

harrasement

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harassment

issue at

young

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age,

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suicide is not the right decision to make.

However

, there is

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huge role for

parents

, organisations and society to look after their children or

students

to choose their own career

path

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and support them in every aspect of life.