The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The bar chart illustrates a few changes in the
birth
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of people in and outside
Australia
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in three parts of countries between the years 1995 and 2010.
Overall
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, the
birth
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in the cities is always higher than in the other two parts in both cases.
While
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the number of people born in rural areas seems to decrease outside
Australia
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and in the case of
towns
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, it shows a clear contrast between the years.
Firstly
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, in 1995 people born in cities has the largest population with almost 45% in
Australia
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and 60% outside of
Australia
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. Rural areas outside of
Australia
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brags the next best place in terms of percentage of exactly 40% and nearly 30% in
Australia
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. Interestingly
towns
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outside
Australia
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have only just above 10% of
birth
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compared to the
towns
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in
Australia
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with 20%.
Secondly
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, later in 15 years, the cities still dominate the
birth
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population by increasing to almost 65% in
Australia
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and a significant rise to 80% outside.
Towns
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and rural areas share the same percentage inside the country of nearly 17% and both plummeted to almost 10% and approximately 2% outside of
Australia
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respectively.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words birth, australia, towns with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Percentage
  • Demographic
  • Trends
  • Urban areas
  • Rural areas
  • Town
  • Native-born
  • Foreign-born
  • Migration patterns
  • Economic factors
  • Government policies
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Steady
  • Peak
  • Trough
  • Time frame
  • Significant changes
  • Distribution
  • Notable
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