The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The bar chart illustrates a few changes in the
birth
of people in and outside Use synonyms
Australia
in three parts of countries between the years 1995 and 2010.
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Overall
, the Linking Words
birth
in the cities is always higher than in the other two parts in both cases. Use synonyms
While
the number of people born in rural areas seems to decrease outside Linking Words
Australia
and in the case of Use synonyms
towns
, it shows a clear contrast between the years.
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Firstly
, in 1995 people born in cities has the largest population with almost 45% in Linking Words
Australia
and 60% outside of Use synonyms
Australia
. Rural areas outside of Use synonyms
Australia
brags the next best place in terms of percentage of exactly 40% and nearly 30% in Use synonyms
Australia
. Interestingly Use synonyms
towns
outside Use synonyms
Australia
have only just above 10% of Use synonyms
birth
compared to the Use synonyms
towns
in Use synonyms
Australia
with 20%.
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Secondly
, later in 15 years, the cities still dominate the Linking Words
birth
population by increasing to almost 65% in Use synonyms
Australia
and a significant rise to 80% outside. Use synonyms
Towns
and rural areas share the same percentage inside the country of nearly 17% and both plummeted to almost 10% and approximately 2% outside of Use synonyms
Australia
respectively.Use synonyms
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