The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The bar chart illustrates a few changes in the
birth
of people in and outside
Australia
in three parts of countries between the years 1995 and 2010.
Overall
, the
birth
in the cities is always higher than in the other two parts in both cases.
While
the number of people born in rural areas seems to decrease outside
Australia
and in the case of
towns
, it shows a clear contrast between the years.
Firstly
, in 1995 people born in cities has the largest population with almost 45% in
Australia
and 60% outside of
Australia
. Rural areas outside of
Australia
brags the next best place in terms of percentage of exactly 40% and nearly 30% in
Australia
. Interestingly
towns
outside
Australia
have only just above 10% of
birth
compared to the
towns
in
Australia
with 20%.
Secondly
, later in 15 years, the cities still dominate the
birth
population by increasing to almost 65% in
Australia
and a significant rise to 80% outside.
Towns
and rural areas share the same percentage inside the country of nearly 17% and both plummeted to almost 10% and approximately 2% outside of
Australia
respectively.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Percentage
  • Demographic
  • Trends
  • Urban areas
  • Rural areas
  • Town
  • Native-born
  • Foreign-born
  • Migration patterns
  • Economic factors
  • Government policies
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Steady
  • Peak
  • Trough
  • Time frame
  • Significant changes
  • Distribution
  • Notable
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