some people think that cultural traditions may be destroyed when they are used as money-making attractions aimed at tourists. Others believe it is the only way to save these traditions. discuss on both sides and give your opinion.

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worldwide, which is risky when those places have

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aim to rely on travellers' distributions.

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some propound that

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will result in the

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disappearance

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, others argue that

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is the only solution to preserve them.

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both views before elaborating on my opinion. On the one hand, a

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world has played a crucial role in revolutionizing diverse authentic

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, most ethnic groups have been adjusting their lifestyles, from

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conventional ways to

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modern ones.

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, plenty of small villagers residing in the northern part of Thailand have to make ends meet for their families by solely providing accommodations and travel services to tourists, which is considered to be a

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phenomenon since they are prone to discard their

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.

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, in some areas, members of society have not

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modernised world nowadays. In

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way, they can preserve their identity and make money from their

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. Needless to say, if people can manage their businesses from their identity and culture, it would be one of the optimal

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by far. In Japan, many ancient or small villages

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is why they can

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their places and

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appropriately. In conclusion, even though some people ponder that the customer-driven society or tourism will destroy particular

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traditions

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in certain regions, others disagree that

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is one of the

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methods to save old

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so far. I am of opinion that people can run their

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businesses

in a sustainable way to preserve their ways of life.