The line graph below gives information on cinema attendance in the UK.

The line graph below gives information on cinema attendance in the UK.
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The given line chart shows the percentage of people by
age
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group who went to the cinema from 1990 to 2010.
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, we can see that all four categories followed the same pattern during the 20-year period.
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, the 44-54
age
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group had the biggest number of cinema attendance. In 1990, the biggest percentage of movie users accounted for those 34-54 years old at 37%,
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the lowest figure involved the youth between the
age
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of 14 and 24 at about 15% and just above 20% for those under 34. All the numbers increased gradually until 1995 before dropping slowly by 2000. In the next five years, the UK cinema witnessed a significant growth of users' attendance by nearly 10% for each
age
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group. By 2010, these figures had reached their peaks, with the highest percentage at just over 50 including the oldest visitors and around 20% for the younger generations.
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