Some people say that the best way to improve Vinsers’ health is by increasing the number of sports facilities at VinGroup/Vinhomes locations. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health at those sites and that other measures are required. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.

In Vietnam,

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health

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is

one

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of the most controversial topics that

being

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taken care of by the

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government. To improve the

health

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of Vietnamese people, the

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government demands local authorities

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real estate organizers to come up with

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solutions to maximize their citizen's

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.

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of the biggest real estate

oganizers

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organizers

in Vietnam is

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with over 50 modern urban

neighborhoods

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lie

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throughout Vietnam. To take care of

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problem,

Vingoup

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Vingroup

came up with solutions by creating the most

convinient

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convenient

for their customers to

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exercise and encouraging their

citizens

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to do it more.

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,

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has been improving their

infurstructure

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infrastructure

by

buiding

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building

more public

sport

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facilities

such

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as tennis courts, swimming

pool

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pools

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, basketball courts,...

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create

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more green field areas

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as green parks. By doing

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, more and more

citizens

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can access

to

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those

ultilities

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utilities

site

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and build good habits for their

health

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.

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,

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has been trying to create more

fasinating

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fascinating

activities

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as running

day

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, tennis tournaments,

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and sportdays

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sportdays

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sport days

sports days

to encourage their customers to improve their

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.

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, an assessment from the public

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government show that,

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even though

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's efforts to

increased

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overall

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the overall

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of Vietnamese people,

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public

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still remains the same.

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problem is supposed to

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lack of participation of their

citizens

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and no changes in their eating habits.

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, their customers increased their time in attending

sport

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activities but their time attending is still low

due to

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living far from their work.

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,

one

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of the most things that

affects

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the

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health

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is

eatting

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eating

habit

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habits

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, their

citizens

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are not change

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are not changing

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it because they refer

fast

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to fast

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food more than healthy

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because

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their lack of time. In conclusion,

Vingroup

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has been trying to improve the

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overall

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health

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, but

their

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are

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more

need

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to be done to

archieve

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achieve

for that goal.