The bar charts below describe the weekly hours worked by people in four Scandinavian countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar charts below describe the weekly hours worked by people in four Scandinavian countries in 2002.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The
four bar
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chats compare how much time people worked per week in Denmark, Norway, Sweden, and Finland in 2002. It is obvious that 35–40-year-old
groups
were the major workers in those countries,
while
all 1-14 age
groups
certainly seldom worked in 2002.
To begin
with, it can be seen that the highest
work
hours weekly
groups
were 35-40 years old, particularly in Norway 35–40 age citizens spend
most
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time on
work
weekly at 48.1%.
In contrast
, 1-14 age
groups
were the lowest
groups
to
work
per week in 4 countries, and these ages were the smallest workers at merely 3.2% in Sweden. We can see that the percentage of
work
hours weekly in Sweden and in Norway had similar patterns in 2002, in which the second-highest
groups
were both above 41 ages, around 17%
workers
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, and the third populations were 21-30 ages.
Additionally
, the above 41-year-old worker group was the lowest at only 9.6% in Denmark.
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