The graph below shows the amount of money spent on six consumer goods in 4 countries. Explain in details
The bar chart provides information on how 4 countries spent on six main expenditures. X-axis gives data on the amount
money
spent in Change preposition
of money
sterling
Add an article
the sterling
a sterling
pound
(thousands) Fix the agreement mistake
pounds
while
Y-axis shows six different items.
Both Britain and France mostly spent on photographic films which is
170,00 sterling pounds Change the verb form
are
while
in Italy and Germany, the highest expense was on toys.The amount spent on perfumes and tennis racquets was same
and was responsible for the largest cost in Germany which was 150,000 sterling pounds. Britain's Correct article usage
the same
spent
on all six consumer goods Wrong verb form
spending
were
either the highest or equal compared to Correct subject-verb agreement
was
other
3 countries.Correct article usage
the other
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