It is suggested that all young adults should undertake a period of unpaid work, helping people in the community. Does it bring more benefits or drawbacks to the young people?

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that all
youth
in the
community
should
work
voluntarily for the benefit of the
community
.
Although
making the
youth
do unpaid
work
for the
community
can have certain disadvantages, I consider that its benefits far outweigh its drawbacks. Undoubtedly, doing unpaid
work
for the
community
would be beneficial for the
youth
in many ways.
Firstly
, by helping the elderly, the sick and the disabled directly, or participating in charitable activities like raising funds or offering free consultation, young people will certainly gain and accumulate some valuable first-hand experience. The second benefit would be that it would make them feel more connected to
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society. There would be a sense of ownership for
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society among the
youth
for the
community
as they
work
for its betterment.
Finally
, volunteering provides a natural sense of accomplishment.
Youth's
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role as a volunteer can
also
give them a sense of pride and identity. It would make the
youth
feel better about themselves and in
turn
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make them more self-confident. The better they feel about themselves, the more likely they are to have a positive view of their life and future goals.
However
, there may be some disadvantages if the young provide free
service
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helping people in need.
For example
, it may conflict with their normal study or
work
if not arranged well.
In addition
,
youth
might feel burdened and forcing them might create a feeling of resentment among the
youth
rather than create a feeling of self-confidence and accomplishment.
To conclude
, I believe that
youth
undertaking some voluntary
community
work
would be very beneficial despite the few drawbacks.
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