the graph compare the number of train passengers and percentage of train running on time from 1995 to 2004.
the graph compares the
number
of train
passengers
and the percentage
of trains
running on time
from 1995 to 2004.
it is clear that in 1995 ,the amount of train
passengers
was the lowest meanwhile the accounted of trains
running on time
was the highest. the number
of train
passengers
in 2001 was the highest, but the percentage
of trains
running in 2000 was the lowest .
the figure for train
passengers
increased gradually from 250 in 1995 million
to 265 million
in 1999.but the percentage
of trains
running on time
declined significantly from 94% to 86% from 1995 to 1997 and increased to 94% from 1997 to 1999.
from 1999 to 2002, the number
of train
passengers
increased dramatically to 300 million
,but the percentage
of trains
running on time
declined rapidly to 85%.from 2001 to 2004 the number
of passengers
falling to 280 million
in 2002,and then
keep steadily in the last
3 years, by contrast
,the accounted for trains
running on time
showed a downward trend to 74 %.Submitted by 992127079 on
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