Some people say that the best way to improve Vinsers’ health is by increasing the number of sports facilities at VinGroup or Vinhomes locations. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health at those sites and that other measures are required. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion
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There are several ways to improve our Vin inhabitants' public
health
. One of them is increasing the number of Use synonyms
sports
facilities to promote Use synonyms
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sport
participation. Change the noun form
sports
However
, some argue Linking Words
this
solution would be not as effective as other Linking Words
measures
, Use synonyms
such
as encouraging playing Linking Words
sports
at Use synonyms
current
available sites. Each approach has its merits and demerits; Change the adjective
currently
therefore
, they should not be overlooked.
On one hand, expanding the number of Linking Words
sport
-specialized sites will encourage Use synonyms
people
to participate in Use synonyms
sports
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This
is because Linking Words
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populous
and Correct article usage
a populous
densed
city like Hanoi, it is difficult to find a suitable gym Correct your spelling
dense
that is
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well equipped
with new and modern Add a hyphen
well-equipped
equipments
. Change the wording
equipment
types of equipment
pieces of equipment
In addition
, the distance should be taken into consideration since a decent Linking Words
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sport
complex might be sometimes out of reach for many Change the noun form
sports
people
. By constructing new Use synonyms
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sport
facilities, the exposure to Change the noun form
sports
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sport
buildings will increase; Change the noun form
sports
therefore
, more Linking Words
people
will engage in Use synonyms
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sport
activities to improve Change the noun form
sports
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health
. Correct pronoun usage
their health
Moreover
, new Linking Words
equipments
are safer, Change the wording
equipment
types of equipment
pieces of equipment
hence
preventing users from getting unwanted injuries from broken machines.
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On the other hand
, considering the circumstance of Hanoi as aforementioned, empty space for construction becomes scarce. Linking Words
Consequently
, the Linking Words
expand
of Replace the word
expansion
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sport
facilities is not feasible without proper urban planning, especially dedicating a part of the urban area as a Change the noun form
sports
sport
-focused district. which is demanding and time-consuming. Use synonyms
Therefore
, alternative solutions might Linking Words
shows
immediate superior efficacy in Change the verb form
show
this
case. Linking Words
For instance
, those alternatives include encouraging Linking Words
people
to participate in Use synonyms
sports
at Use synonyms
current
available stadiums or holding outdoor marathon competitions to reduce dependence on stadiums. All of Change the adjective
currently
those
solutions above are cost-efficient and equally beneficial.
In my opinion, I believe any Correct determiner usage
the
measures
can be applied given that we have Use synonyms
adequate
Correct article usage
an adequate
labor
force and land for construction. New stadiums will be notably significantly beneficial Change the spelling
labour
on
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in
a
long run Correct article usage
the
as well as
improving the city's aesthetics. Linking Words
In addition
, alternative Linking Words
measures
will show their effects immediately and Use synonyms
last
for a long time. A perfect approach should be a combination of these Linking Words
measures
.
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To conclude
, there is no single best way to improve Vinsers's Linking Words
health
. To improve Vinser's Use synonyms
health
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effectively
, many Replace the word
effects
measures
must be taken as a whole for synergy to reach Use synonyms
their
maximum Correct pronoun usage
its
potentials
.Fix the agreement mistake
potential
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