In the past, most people lived in the countryside and worked in farming. Some people believe that this was a better way of life than the way most people live today. To what extent do you agree or disagree
Peasants are vigorously significant in our
life.in the previous decades,people who survived by farming lived in villages,
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moreoverothers fathom that
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thiswas a good way of
liferather than today.I completely disagree with
thisview because we are living in an era where everything is top-notched and it's making our
lifemore astounding than ever. First and foremost, day by day we are becoming more digitalized and living a better
lifethan ever.To be precise,now we can do any work by using advanced technology ,which makes our
lifeeasier and more comfortable.
this,we can generate more food, a better health system and top-notched transportation.To illustrate
this,in previous times we can't export our food out of our own town because we didn't have a good transportation system ,
thereforemost of the farmers can't able to make benefits.But now we can export our foods, clothes and medicines to any country ,which
alsobenefited poor countries.
Moreover,we can communicate with anyone in the world beyond our imagination.The mobile phone brings
thisrevolutionary aspect.Though we face some unwanted problems these can be mitigated by our proper intention.
this, we have now a greater education system,which is the primary need in everyone's
life.To illustrate these students are now able to access their necessary things by using computers and phones but in the previous ,times we just went to school and learn what our teacher taught us.At present time pupils know many things outside of the context,which makes them more intelligent . In conclusion,today we live in an era where everything is under our control,
hencewe can live a better
lifethan ever.Though these inventions create problems like wars,cyber crimes and expensive products these things sort out by making proper steps.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- in additional
- for example
- for instance
- even though