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Some commentators feel that, grandparents should live together with their childrens and grandchildrens, while others say that elderly people should be encouraged to live independently. Consider the possible arguments of this debate and reach your own conclusion

1. For most
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, it is safe and effective to give more than one vaccine at the same time. Is
this
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 statement true or false? Explain and support your answer. The statement is true , The scientific basis
recommend
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to provide
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 vaccinations simultaneously which
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supported by experimental data and significant clinical experience. The likelihood that a child, adolescent, or adult will be fully immunized by the recommended age increases when all
vaccines
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 that person is eligible for are given simultaneously at the time of a visit. ( Centers for Disease Control and Prevention , 2023) 2. Briefly explain how each of the following
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work
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 to prevent illness. List one vaccine of each type. a.
mRNA
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 To stimulate an immune response,
mRNA
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vaccines
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 produce proteins.
mRNA
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vaccines
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 have a significant advantage over other vaccine types, including quicker manufacturing timeframes and no risk of disease transmission to the recipient
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 the absence of a live virus. Several diseases that
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vaccines
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 are used to prevent include:

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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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