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foundation
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of a hydraulic dam. The process involves a large dam , Correct your spelling
principles
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powerhouse
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hydroelectric
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procedure
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words power, water with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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