The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph shows how much
fish
and meat
(chicken
, beef
, and lamb) were consumed by the average person in a particular European country from 1979 to 2004 in grams per week (gpw
).
Correct your spelling
gw
Overall
, consumption
of all types of meat
declined with the exception of chicken
, which showed a steady increase in popularity. Chicken
replaced beef
as the most popular meat
, while
fish
remained the least consumed throughout the period
. At the start of the period
, beef
was the most popular meat
, with over 200 gpw
being consumed by the average person. At the same time, consumption
of chicken
and lamb stood at about 150 gpw
, while
that of fish
was much lower, at 60 gpw
. Correct your spelling
gw
Thereafter
, individual chicken
consumption
rose steadily, finishing the period
at 250 gpw
, while
in contrast
, personal demand for beef
and lamb saw consistent declines, despite beef
peaking at around 240 gpw
in 1984. By the end of the period
, their respective levels of consumption
had fallen to around 100 and 60 gpw
.
With regard to Correct your spelling
now
fish
, it was the least popular at all times
, falling from 60 Fix the agreement mistake
time
gpw
eaten by a typical person in this
country in 1979, to 40 gpw
in 2004.Submitted by cleoovo on
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