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some people say history is one of the most important school subject. Other people think in todays world subject like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion?

#people #history #school #todays #world #science #technology
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consider
history
 as the major lesson to learn in school ,
while
 others give priority to
science
 and
technology
 .
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both
 of these
ideas
 , I am
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 the view that these two subjects are equally important in
class rooms
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classrooms
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.
History
 in the
curicculum
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curriculum
 is taking an important role
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 the studies to provide enormous knowledge about the past and existence of humanity
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 the globe. As a ,result the
students
 will get more understanding from the
classroom
 about how mankind transformed from the beginning to
this
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taken
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 by rulers in
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history
 will help the learners to get more confidence and generate thinking ability.
For instance
, the
history
 of
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used to ease
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life and about the laws and punishments which helped rule the nation . So learning
history
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for
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students
 in
classroom
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.
On the other hand
,
science
 and
technology
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 pouring immense area of opportunities for upcoming generations to build up
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fruitful carrier in their life.
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 the physical and mental stress in the sophisticated world. The new world and its possibilities are almost
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up on
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the
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information
technology
,
hence
 learning
this
 subject in
classroom
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the classroom
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 will be valuable for the
students
 In my view , both of
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 subjects should include in the learning programs in
classroom
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, so that the children can learn
ideas
 and attain knowledge from
history
. They will get
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how
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about how
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 the world has
became
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on
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 the current situation ,
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 will get
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ideas
 about the pros and cons of
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war and
and
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othe
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other
 calamities.
In contrast
 , learning
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science
 and
technology
 will help them to build up a good career in the future and which will be
helps
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 for their daily activities. In conclusion , learning
history
 is
essential
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 part because it is giving basic
ideas
 about
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human survival and transformation and studying
science
 and
technology
 is equally important for the future of
students
. So both of these subjects should include in
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school studies.
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