The maps below show the changes that took place at a science and technology museum between 1996 and 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The maps show the changes that happened to a Science and technology museum for a 10-year period from 1996 to 2016.
Overall
, more facilities and exhibition rooms were added in 2016.
In 1996, a writing desk was located in the upper left corner of the map. But, it was replaced by computers in 2016. Also
, the print room and the library which were originally stationed in the middle of the building were replaced by a digital technology room and 3D cinema. The library was relocated to the upper middle corner of the 2016 map.
A solar wind area was built in 2016 at the right upper corner of the building, and just under that, there was a car park that seems to be smaller than previously as a bicycle park occupied the area that was originally for a car park only. There were also
changes to the cafe and reception. The cafe changed into a restaurant and the reception become a bit bigger.Submitted by irarahmawati.polkesma on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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