The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The flowchart depicts all the necessary steps in recycling
aluminium
cans
. Those processes will be divided into two crucial steps: compressing and recycling the items.
The whole production is
started with the collecting of old Unnecessary verb
apply
cans
in the trash cans
, spesifically
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specifically
aluminium
cans
garbage. Before Add a missing verb
being processed
processed
Wrong verb form
processing
further
, those cans
need to be cleaned and sorted to filter any contamination. Furthermore
, after Add a missing verb
being sorted
sorted
, those goods need to be shredded and compressed by recent technologies in the factory.
In the subsequent stage, the resulting old Wrong verb form
sorting
cans
need to be heated to produce some melted aluminium
goods. Afterwards, the melted cans
is
processed by rolling technologies which have 2.5 mm - 6 mm thickness, resulting in the Change the verb form
are
aluminium
recycling that can be spread out and used for the consumers. Based on the experiments, 74% population in the United Kingdom reuses recycled cans
which is one of alternatives
to solve waste management in the country.Add an article
the alternatives
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