Topic from Task 1 The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households

Topic from Task 1

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households
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The provided line graphs demonstrate the fluctuations in the usage of electrical gadgets and the time expenditure doing
household
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activities in a country in a life span of 99 years between 1920 till 2029. The figures below are given in percentages on one line graph and in numbers on the other.
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, after looking at both charts, it can be found that the usage of washing
machines
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, refrigerators, and vacuum cleaners is the least in 1920.
While
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there is a gradual brief rise in all three
appliances
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starting from 1980 to 2019.
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, it can
also
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be added that in the below diagram, the
household
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members spent an enormous amount of
hours
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doing activities
such
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as washing clothes, preparing meals, and cleaning in 1920, but in 2019
this
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is manifested with a huge reduction in figures
due to
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the escalation of ownership of
household
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appliances
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.
To begin
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with, housewives in 1920 didn’t own any electrical
machines
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for washing clothes or preparing meals and
that is
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shown vividly in the first graph as the percentages for the usage of washing
machines
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, refrigerators, and vacuum cleaners are 40
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percent
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per cent
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, 0
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percent
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per cent
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and 30
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percent
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per cent
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respectively. Whilst, a gradual increase was manifested in the years from 1980 to 2019 in the three gadgets with a
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percent
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of 100
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percent
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per cent
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for two
appliances
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and approximately around 75% for washing clothes
machines
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in particular
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.
In addition
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to that, the figures in the second chart show the simultaneous incline and decline in activities done at home in the same life span between 1920 till 2019. To illustrate, the
household
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members spent most of their time around 50
hours
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per week in 1920 doing every single home activity with their hands
due to
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the non-ownership of
appliances
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.
While
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a reflection of decline was manifested below in 1960 at 20
hours
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per week and continues to decrease to 10
hours
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per week until we
reach2019
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reach 2019
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "due to, while".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words household, machines, appliances, hours, percent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.
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