Topic from Task 1 The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households

Topic from Task 1

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households
The provided line graphs demonstrate the fluctuations in the usage of electrical gadgets and the time expenditure doing
household
activities in a country in a life span of 99 years between 1920 till 2029. The figures below are given in percentages on one line graph and in numbers on the other.
Overall
, after looking at both charts, it can be found that the usage of washing
machines
, refrigerators, and vacuum cleaners is the least in 1920.
While
there is a gradual brief rise in all three
appliances
starting from 1980 to 2019.
Furthermore
, it can
also
be added that in the below diagram, the
household
members spent an enormous amount of
hours
doing activities
such
as washing clothes, preparing meals, and cleaning in 1920, but in 2019
this
is manifested with a huge reduction in figures
due to
the escalation of ownership of
household
appliances
.
To begin
with, housewives in 1920 didn’t own any electrical
machines
for washing clothes or preparing meals and
that is
shown vividly in the first graph as the percentages for the usage of washing
machines
, refrigerators, and vacuum cleaners are 40
percent
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, 0
percent
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and 30
percent
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respectively. Whilst, a gradual increase was manifested in the years from 1980 to 2019 in the three gadgets with a
percent
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of 100
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for two
appliances
and approximately around 75% for washing clothes
machines
in particular
.
In addition
to that, the figures in the second chart show the simultaneous incline and decline in activities done at home in the same life span between 1920 till 2019. To illustrate, the
household
members spent most of their time around 50
hours
per week in 1920 doing every single home activity with their hands
due to
the non-ownership of
appliances
.
While
a reflection of decline was manifested below in 1960 at 20
hours
per week and continues to decrease to 10
hours
per week until we
reach2019
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reach 2019
.
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