The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

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The pie chart compares different types of study and

work

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which anthropologists start after their degree graduation from one university. Meanwhile, the table illustrates the percentages in four classes of

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and in three different sectors of jobs after 5 years from their beginning.

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, it is noticeable that the mid of these (52 per

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) are employed in a full-time job and at least 65 per

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of these earn more than 75 thousand pounds after five years.

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, full-time

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is the most popular choice staying at 52% and part-time postgraduate

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is the least chosen.

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, the proportion of part-time

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differs slightly by 3 per

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from unemployment. Regarding the table, the highest proportion in the lowest category of

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belongs to private companies at 10%,

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the other

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sectors have the same percentage for the

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between 25,000 and 74,999 at 75%. In the

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highest categories of

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, both the

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last

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sectors have three-quarters of workers.

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, Private companies have only just over 50 per

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in these

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categories.

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

A few people debate that technological inventions like cell phones are making people socially less interactive. To what extend do you agree with this statement

Increasing the price is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some people think that the best way to resolve environmental problems is to increase fuel and vehicles’ prices. Do you agree or disagree with the statement?

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