The diagram shows a process of making a storage area from a material called concrete canvas

The table shows information about a material called concrete canvas and how to make a storage

area

with it. The process

go

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through 8 different

stages

, each has its own methods to complete it perfectly.

Further

,

this

report will discuss the approach in

details

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from the

begin

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until the end.

To begin

with, concrete

canves

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canvas

a

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method used to build storage

area

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. The first step in making it,

manufacturing

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which includes several

stages

such

as fibrous top surface, dry concrete, and waterproof layer.

After

this

,

delivering

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it to the

area

,

then

unwrapping.

This

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is the

stages

made in factor before arriving

to

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the place of

building

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.

In addition

,

fourth

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step is

sppreading

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spreading

on the ground when you need a truck, rope,

pegs

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and

choose

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the

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place within 10 meters.

Following

this

, the builder needs an air pump to make that the door is closed,

then

start pumping air to make the place

in

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good

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temperature. To continue the process,

three

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last

stages

go through watering,

setteing

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setting

and

finally

storing underground by 8 meters to keep the

whether

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weather

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good as enough.

To sum up

,

this

process

to help

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society if they need to build a storage

area

in their areas.